Tuesday 25 May 2021

My quick write

 This week I have been doing a quick write called list the buttons. It's really fun. You have to describe the things that you see on the picture and write them down.

Tell me what buttons you can see? 

Try to find the beer caps, the lego, the yellow red and green string.

Did you find them?


4 comments:

  1. Hi Jaxon,
    I like how you put the name of the quick write in. It reminds me of when I did that quick write. What day did you do it on? Otherwise I like it.

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  2. Hi Jaxon, Cornelia here
    I like the way you have told me what you have been learning.
    It reminds me of the time when I did my quick write on that. But it was completely different. Its cool to see that mine yours is different. I did mine in a sort of list where you did yours in a line.

    You might need to do a bit more writing to explain more about your activite.

    Cornelia

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  3. Kia ora Jaxon, I like your blog because you had to find all the stuff that you said to find like the bottle cap. But next time try put a pit more writing in it. From Bramm

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  4. Hi Jaxon,
    I really like how you put in "List the Buttons". It reminds me of the time I did that quick write. I also like how you put in "Tell me what buttons can you see"? The blog post was very good otherwise. I like it.

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