This week we have been learning about little blue penguins and it has been awesome. We sat on the mat and the teachers told us stuff about the little blue penguin.
I can tell you all I know about them. Little blue penguins are getting endangered around New Zealand. We are trying to help them because every morning they have to get food for their chicks but there is a lot of danger to get through. Cats, dogs, stoats, sea lions, cars and sometimes restaurants take over their nest. Sometimes they can get caught in fishing nets from commercial fishing boats. If the little blue penguins swim 300 meters down, they could die. Did you know that little blue penguins can waddle 1.5 kilometers and this is really impressive for the smallest penguin in the world.
I hope we can save the little blue penguins from getting endangered.
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Cornelia here! Your writing is very good! I like the way you have written it, it is very persuasive. Did you know that there are 600,000 left in the world? 🌍 I don't think there is anything you need to fix up itd all done right. But for more exaggeration you could use a ! at the end of the last sentence.
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ReplyDeleteI like the you have reread lots! How do you get all those people to look at your blogs you are very popular with your weekly news.
You might need to press enter where the sentence changes to Sometime they get caught (ect)